Here's the summary of last week's crit:
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| The model I presented to show a scale of a typical HDB executive maisonette and the 40 iteration layouts. |
Last Crit's Feedback
Presentation Board - 22 April 2014
Here is the board I presented during the last crit session. 
My intention is to have all these contents on the board (see below). The brief and concept seem clear and resolved. I believe I managed to do so with some details that need more specifications and clarity in terms of visual presentation.
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In my opinion, the board missed out to highlight most of the project's concept as well as the scheme with the aid of the visuals, as planned. But the time was spent trying to explore something new in my presentation board. I thought this design complements with my scheme and hence, I tried this out despite the time pressure and being new to this presentation style. However, I still could not make it work. Still, I think the attempt deserves a spot in my blog because it took me a few good hours just trying to lay them out the right way, but to no avail. I will still give it a try for the next round.
Zooming in:
Title - reflects the feature of the proposed furniture.
Background - concept images and word cloud to summarize the chosen concept.
Brief - with diagrams and illustrations of proposal.
Family Tree - with research around it
Layout Plans - shows four different layouts that explain the process of transformation that the users experience within the day.
Axonometric view - to locate the areas within the house.
Some visuals showing more interior details.
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